Zuzana wrote:So what do you find lacking in / irritating about the prose style? Just curious.
Sorry for the delay in replying-I haven't been on the boards as much lately.
I often found that, perhaps amplifying/counterpointing a previous post, that the text was rather
too straightforward, especially but not exclusively in the short biographical sections. Those pieces read more like history (it is history of course, but I'm not at school) than rock and roll. I suppose some might prefer that approach, but I found myself quickly skimming those pieces rather than paying rapt attention. I can't quite say how to improve upon them (I'm a drinker, not a writer), and I'm certainly not implying I could do any better.
Then conversely, we'd see some too-cute stylisitics, like carelessly-tossed-around adjectives and adverbs. I marked this passage from
Gudbuy T'Shane: "The Pogues were still packing a jubilant punch, with an unflagging 24-song set..." I obviously understand the the point, but it's overly cutesy to use an old turn-of-phrase like "packing a punch" and gussy it up with "jubilant" so you don't sound banal.
But really these are quibbles, and overall I enjoyed the (quicker than I thought) read.
Congratulations on the "promotion" by the way!
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