Member's verse. Waxing poetic. Getting writing again.

[old barney greyheron]

................LAMENT..........
I went for a drink and they'd closed down the bar
I want to go dogging but I haven't got a car
and the landlord's onto me, giving me grief
and I can't find a dentist and i'm running out of teeth.

[old barney greyheron]

The chip shop on a friday night
once good for you but now it's shite
your obesity is no surprise
take some fucking exercise.


She stood outside the takeaway
an arse on her like a horse
shivering in her too-tight dress
eating chips and curry sauce.

[Noel_Brooks]

Let me try.
A word immediately following a semi-colon should start with a capital letter.

Oh yeah! See what you mean......

You've made a fine effort, but sadly a misguided one.

A semi-colon has no rule regarding punctuating the first word following it. A colon does, but only for specific situations:<blockquote><blockquote type=cite>Capitalize the first word after a colon if it is a proper noun or the start of a whole sentence.</blockquote></blockquote>

Information about both abound, but I found these two sources to be helpful:

http://essaypapers.reviews/
http://essayinfo.com/sguides/semi-colon.php

Thank you for sharing!

[Low D]

................LAMENT..........
I went for a drink and they'd closed down the bar
I want to go dogging but I haven't got a car
and the landlord's onto me, giving me grief
and I can't find a dentist and i'm running out of teeth.

Brilliant.